A Choice to Cherish

Debut novelist Maki (a pastor who has co-written three previous nonfiction books on the Vietnam experiences of a Navy SEAL) explores the age-old theme of forgiveness in this simple--and sometimes simplistic--tale of death and discovery. Although the author and main character share the same name, which is initially confusing, the book is a novel and not an autobiographical account. The Christian-themed plot finds college-aged Alan Maki arriving in Montana to stay with his dying grandfather over Christmas vacation. Alan has not seen his estranged grandfather in 10 years, so he feels both apprehensive and excited, hoping to learn more about the fateful choices made by his father and grandfather. As Alan decorates the Christmas tree, his grandfather George directs him to place eight items under the tree, from which Alan may choose one after reading the stories behind each item. Following in the tradition of The Christmas Box, the stories unfold in a contemplative, unhurried manner, encouraging the reader to explore the meaning of spirituality and the subtle art of discussing Christian faith with a nonbeliever. Unfortunately, many of the plot devices are predictable, such as Alan's father arriving on cue to mend broken family ties. Maki (the author) misses opportunities to develop his characters; for example, Maki (the protagonist) demonstrates little introspective deliberation regarding the stories that supposedly bring major changes to his worldview. The prose is unremarkable, but the basic storytelling shows promise for a first-time novelist. Despite the flaws, those Christian readers who appreciate the plainness of lives quietly lived are sure to find some food for thought here. (Oct.)