Pay the Piper

Kraus’s second attempt at completing an unfinished novel from horror master Romero (1940–2017), after The Living Dead, is a dud; the plot, about a boogeyman targeting children in the Louisiana bayou, is familiar, and lackluster prose and thin characterizations do little to elevate it. The backwoods town of Alligator Point is home to the legend of the Piper, “the thing kids whispered about, the thing that drank laughter like Kool-Aid, that chewed good feelings like bubblegum.” The Piper strikes early in the narrative, abducting nine-year-old Billy May as punishment for the sins of his ancestors, then removing his heart and devouring it. Billy’s fate remains unknown for months, but after more kids disappear, panic sets in, and his best friend endeavors to learn the truth. Kraus’s rendering of the Cajun dialect often sounds like a parody (“Dat somet’ing out t’ere, it de root of all de awful on de Point”), and the plot’s late-breaking Lovecraftian elements feel tacked on and can’t save the cookie-cutter story line. Even diehard Romero fans will be disappointed. (Aug.)